PROJECT 1
DRAFT 1: I had a significant accomplishment with draft 1 in that I wrote as much information on the museum as feasible. As a result, it was simpler to deal with in drafts 2 and 3. One of the difficulties I had with my initial draft was providing additional photographs and referencing them.
Draft 2: The addition of relevant photographs, as well as more quotations and descriptions about the place, was a significant success in draft 2. The structure of the project, as well as including my attachment to the place in greater depth, were the challenges I faced with my second draft.
Final Draft: In order for my final draft to be excellent, I worked really hard to address the issues that I encountered in drafts 1 and 2. For me, that was both a triumph and a struggle. I reorganized the structure and included the citations.
How do you let go of attachment to things? Don’t even try. It’s impossible. Attachment to things drops away by itself when you no longer seek to find yourself in them.”-Eckhart Tolle